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if you have lost an valuable in the train. write the letter to authorities.

if you have lost an valuable in the train. write the letter to authorities. VBRn3

Dear sir or madam, I am writing this to inform you that I recently lost my mobile phone while I was in the train of Hamilton to Toronto. The mobile phone is a black iPhone 12 and cost around $1200 when I bought few months before. It has a 5. 3-inch display and was in black plastic cover with my name written on it. It also has a little crack on the top of the display. When I was board on the train it was with me. But after 15min of journey I put my mobile phone on beside of my seat and I was looking for something in my bag pack till the Toronto station. I was sitting in the car 3 on the seat number C32. I think I have left my Mobile phone on seat number C33. Please if you could find my mobile phone you can inform me on my email which is peit23@ymail. com. I will collect it from Hamilton or Toronto station at your convenient time. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest suitable time. Your faithfully Piet Johnson

Dear sir or madam,

I am writing this to inform you that I recently lost my mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 while I was in the train of Hamilton to Toronto.

The mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 is a black iPhone 12 and cost around $1200 when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 few months This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. It has a 5. 3-inch display and was in black plastic cover with my name written on it. It also
 has a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 crack on the top of the display.

“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 I was board on the train it was with me. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 after 15min of journey I put my mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 on beside of my Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).seat, and
seat and
 I was looking for something in my bag pack till the Toronto station. I was sitting in the car 3 on the seat number C32. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 my Mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 on seat number C33.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 if you could find my mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 you can inform me on my email which is peit23@ymail. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCom
com
. I will collect it from Hamilton or Toronto station at your convenient time.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest suitable time.

Your faithfully


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