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I am going to write a letter to my teacher

I am going to write a letter to my teacher m98mq

Dear my teacher I am writing to you from Berlin. As promised, I am writing to you about my present life. My family and I came here a month ago. We are staying in a guest-house in the city centre. So far the weather is fine. We did a lot of sightseeing. We have already been to German Car factory and the Archeological museum. However we have not been to the Information Technology University yet. I tried paella yesterday at an open-air restaurant. The food was delicious and the service was excellent. The only bad thing was while we were enjoying our dessert, it started raining. Fortunately it was just a shower! That's what I wanted to tell you. I am going to send a special present for you. But the name is mystery. I hope you like my present. I and my family are going to go to Uzbekistan. I hope we will meet again. Love George

Dear my teacher

I am writing to you from Berlin. As promised, I am writing to you about my present life. My family and I came here a month ago. We are staying in a guest-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 in the city Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 far the weather is fine. We did This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 sightseeing. We have already been to German Car factory and the Archeological museum. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 we have not been to the Information Technology University yet
. I tried paella yesterday at an open-air restaurant. The food was delicious and the service was excellent. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 thing was while we were enjoying our dessert, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 raining. Fortunately
 it was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a shower! That's what I wanted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you. I am going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 a special present for you. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 the name is mystery. I hope you like my present. I and my family are going to go to Uzbekistan. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope we will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 again. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphGeorge.George!George?George:George,George;
George