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write a letter to your friend. thanking her for invitation, say why you could not come and ask for different date.

write a letter to your friend. thanking her for invitation, say why you could not come and ask for different date. W8n1e
Dear Prachi, I am delighted by your warm invitation. Unfortunately, I would be able to make it due to my work commitments. Let me explain my situation a little further. I am working on my final year dissertation, as we talked about in our last call. Although I hate to disappoint you, just a few hours ago, I received my submission deadline, which coincides with your invitation dates. As you know, I have worked very hard to write this piece; leaving it now for vacation would not be the brightest decision. Could you let me know another time you will be free? I would love to stay with you. I'm also interested to hear about all your new adventures and how is life treating you. I have a lot to tell you about my endeavours. I'll be free in winter and late summer due to university holidays. I'd love to escape loneliness here. Please let me know. your friend, Ananya.
Dear
Prachi
,

I
am delighted
by your warm invitation. Unfortunately, I would be able to
make
it due to my work commitments.

Let
me
explain
my situation a
little
further
. I am working on my final year dissertation, as we talked about in our last call. Although I hate to disappoint you,
just
a few hours ago, I received my submission deadline, which coincides with your invitation dates. As you know, I have worked
very
hard
to write this piece; leaving it
now
for vacation would not be the brightest decision.

Could you
let
me know another time you will be free? I would
love
to stay with you. I'm
also
interested to hear about all your new adventures and how is life treating you.
I
have a lot to
tell
you about my
endeavours
.
I
'll be free in winter and late summer due to university holidays.
I
'd
love
to escape loneliness here.

Please
let
me know.

your
friend,

Ananya
.
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IELTS letter write a letter to your friend. thanking her for invitation, say why you could not come and ask for different date.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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