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You are organising a seminar for your company

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Dear Mr. PAUL I am writing this letter to invite you for a seminar that I am organizing in our company for the next month in the kingdom of bahrain The seminar will cover the topic of many methods which play crucial role for our productive in our daily business life. Both technical and social approaches will be presented during the seminar in the company. It would be my respect to have you as one of the presenters in this seminar. I am definitely convicted that you, head of HR department, can point out substantial headings about social skills. Since we have been facing some communication problems between various departments, I would kindly ask for a comprehensive presentation about effective communication. It would be really beneficial, if you are able to incorporate some real life experiences to not bother employers with full of theory. It would be my pleasure and thankfull and happy if you would be able to attend this seminar in the company with your presentation. I am waiting for you to receiving your reply. Yours sincerely, Khalifa Abdulla

Dear Mr. PAUL

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seminar
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company
 with your presentation.

I am waiting for you to receiving your reply.

Yours sincerely
,

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