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You’ve just had a birthday. Write a letter to your English friend about your favourite birthday present.

You’ve just had a birthday. Write a letter to your English friend about your favourite birthday present. V0nNm
Dear Janet, I have had a birthday recently. I am writing to tell you about my favorite birthday gift. My favorite birthday is a new pair of shoes. It is black skin with red shoelaces. They are light and comfortable, however, their price is certainly not cheap. I really love them a lot because they are very convenient running shoes and very useful for me in doing sports. My parents also compliment me on wearing new shoes that make me more handsome, hence I usually wear them when I hang out at the weekend with my friends as well. Why don’t we meet at the weekend for coffee? I cannot wait to show you my new shoes. I hopefully take some photos with you. Best wishes, An
Dear Janet,

I have had a birthday recently. I am writing to
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tell
you about my favorite birthday gift.

My favorite birthday is a new pair of
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shoes
. It is black skin with red shoelaces. They are light and comfortable,
however
, their price is
certainly
not
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cheap
. I
really
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love
them a lot
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because
they are
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very
convenient running
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shoes
and
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very
useful for me in doing sports. My parents
also
compliment me on wearing new
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shoes
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
me more handsome,
hence
I
usually
wear them when I hang out at the weekend with my friends
as well
.

Why don’t we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
at the weekend for coffee? I cannot wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
you my new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shoes
. I
hopefully
take
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
photos with you.

Best wishes,

An
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IELTS letter You’ve just had a birthday. Write a letter to your English friend about your favourite birthday present.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
126 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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