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Garbage collection system not working, write a letter

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to raise a complaint about the malfunctioning of rubbish collection system located at 1501 Decoto Road, Union city. The system was functional until last Friday night and has stopped working since then causing a lot of discomfort to the residents. The children's park in front, which is typically known for its cleanliness and pleasant view, has been in a disarray, filled with garbage all over. As the trash has a significant amount of food waste, it is infested with flies and rodents, making it extremely unhygienic for both the park visitors and the neighbors. Although my unit is across the street, my house is filled with a strong foul smell due to decomposing waste. This has forced everyone in the neighborhood to keep their doors and windows closed depriving them of fresh airflow. Since this is a critical issue that directly affects the health and safety of the residents, I request you to get the unit repaired as soon as possible. Moreover, we request you to arrange emergency service of garbage trucks so that the existing trash can be cleaned from the streets and close to the park. Looking forward to a quick solution for the issue. Yours faithfully, Sam Jam
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to raise a complaint about the malfunctioning of rubbish collection system located at 1501
Decoto
Road, Union city. The system was functional until last Friday night and has
stopped
working since then causing
a lot of
discomfort to the residents.

The children's park in front, which is
typically
known for its cleanliness and pleasant view, has been in a disarray, filled with garbage all over. As the trash has a significant amount of food waste, it
is infested
with flies and rodents, making it
extremely
unhygienic for both the park visitors and the neighbors. Although my unit is across the street, my
house
is filled
with a strong foul smell due to decomposing waste. This has forced everyone in the neighborhood to
keep
their doors and windows closed depriving them of fresh airflow.

Since this is a critical issue that
directly
affects the health and safety of the residents, I request you to
get
the unit repaired as
soon
as possible.
Moreover
, we request you to arrange emergency service of garbage trucks
so
that the existing trash can
be cleaned
from the streets and close to the park.

Looking forward to a quick solution for the issue.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam Jam
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IELTS letter Garbage collection system not working, write a letter

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  American English
7 paragraphs
209 words
6.5
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