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Lacking interpersonal communication skills

Lacking interpersonal communication skills 6pke8
Dear Ms Brown, I am writing to enquire about the life skills courses you advertised in Youth Magazine. I am currently studying at Nguyen Tran High School. I have to face the problem of lacking interpersonal skills for a long time and it is getting worse. Although I have close friends, I still find it difficult to express my feelings with them. I do not feel comfortable when talking to people and I am afraid of presenting ideas or opinion in front of people. Could you advise me which of the courses that I should take? I would be grateful if you could tell me how much the tuition fee will be if I enrol early. I hope your answer will help me make the right decision about the courses. Thank you very much for your time. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Elis.
Dear Ms Brown, I am writing to
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enquire
about the life
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skills
courses you advertised in Youth Magazine. I am
currently
studying at Nguyen Tran High School. I
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have to
face the problem of lacking interpersonal
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skills
for a long time and it is getting worse. Although I have close friends, I
still
find it difficult to express my feelings with them. I do not feel comfortable when talking to
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people and
I am afraid of presenting
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
or opinion in front of
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people
. Could you advise me which of the courses that I should take? I would be grateful if you could
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tell
me how much the tuition fee will be if I enrol early. I hope your answer will
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help
me
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make
the right decision about the courses. Thank you
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very
much for your time. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely
,
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Elis
.
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IELTS letter Lacking interpersonal communication skills

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
146 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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