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Write a letter to a friend. In your letter • Explain why you want to leave your current job • Describe what kind of job you are looking for • Ask for some help or advice

Write a letter to a friend. In your letter • Explain why you want to leave your current job • Describe what kind of job you are looking for • Ask for some help or advice bOmQB
Dear Sam, It’s been a while I have heard from you. Hope you are doing well. I have been thinking since a while to change my current job. It has already been 5 years in the current profile and company. I feel, now, is the time to look for better opportunity and compensation. After giving 5 years to my company, I have received only one promotion so far which is quite demotivating. Also, the pay what it should be after gaining the experience of 5 years is not upto the level. I am highly dissatisfied for the compensation I am receiving after all the hard work and dedication. Thus, I am planning to switch to new company. As you are aware, I have a very good experience of Customer Handling for the 5 years. My customers have also provided the Google reviews and feedback on the company’s website for the services they have received. Though, I am having an experience in automobile industry but I am open to work for any industry and relocate to any place. Also, I have an experience of Complaint Management along with Sales. Since, you are working as an HR Manager, I am looking forward for your advice and support. I am mailing you my current resume and please guide if it requires any changes. Also, please do update me in-case you get to know about any suitable vacancies related my profile and experience. Looking forward to hear soon. Regards Emma
Dear Sam,

It’s been a while I have heard from you. Hope you are doing well. I have been thinking since a while to
change
my
current
job. It has already been 5 years in the
current
profile and
company
. I feel,
now
, is the time to look for better opportunity and compensation. After giving 5 years to my
company
, I have received
only
one promotion
so
far which is quite demotivating.
Also
, the pay what it should be after gaining the
experience
of 5 years is not
upto
the level. I am
highly
dissatisfied for the compensation I am receiving
after all
the
hard
work and dedication.
Thus
, I am planning to switch to new
company
.

As you are aware, I have a
very
good
experience
of Customer Handling for the 5 years. My customers have
also
provided the Google reviews and feedback on the
company
’s website for the services they have received. Though, I am having an
experience
in automobile industry
but
I am open to work for any industry and relocate to any place.
Also
, I have an
experience
of Complaint Management along with Sales.

Since, you are working as an HR Manager, I am looking forward for your advice and support. I am mailing you my
current
resume and
please
guide if it requires any
changes
.
Also
,
please
do update me in-case you
get
to know about any suitable vacancies related my profile and experience.

Looking forward
to hear
soon
.

Regards

Emma
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend. In your letter • Explain why you want to leave your current job • Describe what kind of job you are looking for • Ask for some help or advice

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
245 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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