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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam 6MPK
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Jayaprakash, I have often visited the cafeteria to have my lunch also one of the great fan of the food menus, whereas, I am writing this letter to inform about the dissatisfaction which I had in the cafeteria. Food served in the cafeteria tastes amazingly delicious, especially, the chicken curry tastes scrumptious compared to the places in this locality. I prefer to eat it twice in a week, it always take same like the first time I had, until this Thursday. For the past few days I count see the food served were over salty as well as spicy, due to that fact, of it caused a stomach ache for the past two days. I request to minimize the amount of salt and other spicy element for the betterment of your customers. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely,
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am
Jayaprakash
, I have
often
visited the cafeteria to have my lunch
also
one of the great fan of the food menus, whereas, I am writing this letter to inform about the dissatisfaction which I had in the cafeteria.

Food served in the cafeteria tastes
amazingly
delicious,
especially
, the chicken curry tastes scrumptious compared to the places in this locality. I prefer to eat it twice in a week, it always
take
same like the
first
time I had, until this Thursday.

For the past few days I count
see
the food served were over salty
as well
as spicy, due to that fact, of it caused a stomach ache for the past two days. I request to minimize the amount of salt and other spicy element for the betterment of your customers.

Look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam

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  American English
6 paragraphs
144 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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