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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter

During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter Bx2m

Dear Sir/MadamI am writing to inform you that I met you last month in a flight to Vancouver. I talked you in a plane about job availability. Let me explain my job preference. I would like to apply for a chef at your restaurant. I have 2 years of experience to work at sky wave restaurant. Would you kindly give me an opportunity to represent my fish? I got good reviews at previous workplace. I have good cooking and presentation skill that makes customers more comfortable. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully

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 writing to inform you that I met you last month in a flight to Vancouver. I talked you in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
 about job availability.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 my job preference. I would like to apply for a chef at your restaurant. I have 2 years of experience to work at sky wave restaurant.

Would you kindly give me an opportunity to represent my fish? I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 reviews at previous workplace. I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 cooking and presentation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 customers more comfortable. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphfaithfully.faithfully!faithfully?faithfully:faithfully,faithfully;
faithfully

IELTS letter During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

92 words

This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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