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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter

During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter Bx2m
Dear Sir/MadamI am writing to inform you that I met you last month in a flight to Vancouver. I talked you in a plane about job availability. Let me explain my job preference. I would like to apply for a chef at your restaurant. I have 2 years of experience to work at sky wave restaurant. Would you kindly give me an opportunity to represent my fish? I got good reviews at previous workplace. I have good cooking and presentation skill that makes customers more comfortable. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully
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writing to inform you that I met you last month in a flight to Vancouver. I talked you in a
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about job availability.

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my job preference. I would like to apply for a chef at your restaurant. I have 2 years of experience to work at sky wave restaurant.

Would you kindly give me an opportunity to represent my fish? I
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got
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good
reviews at previous workplace. I have
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good
cooking and presentation
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skill
that
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makes
customers more comfortable. Thank you for your consideration. Yours
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faithfully
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IELTS letter During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
92 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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