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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement LgAK
Dear Ramya, Hope this letter finds you in best of your health. I’m writing this letter to inform you that my dates of travel to Canada has been postponed due to an unavoidable family function at the same scheduled timespan. That family event is nothing else than the marriage ceremony of my elder brother. I hope you might be knowing our family’s wedding customs. In that groom’s sister is the one who have to put the ring in bride’s fingers. I feel really sorry for you that I had to change my travel plans. I know you have arranged for the leave from your workplace only because of me. If this marriage was not fixed, I could have come there. I can understand that how you will be feeling right now. Anyways I will be coming in the same date of next month. For that I request you to make some necessary arrangements of my stay as well as your work time. In next month, I will surely meet at your place. Convey my regards to uncle and aunty. Hoping to see you soon. Yours truly, Meera
Dear
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Ramya
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Hope this letter finds you in best of your health. I’m writing this letter to inform you that my dates of travel to Canada has
been postponed
due to an unavoidable family function at the same scheduled
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timespan
. That family
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event
is nothing else than the marriage ceremony of my elder brother. I hope you might
The verb 'knowing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
be knowing
our family’s wedding customs. In that groom’s sister is the one who
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
put the ring in bride’s fingers.

I feel
really
sorry for you that I had to
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change
my travel plans. I know you have arranged for the
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leave
from your workplace
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only
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because
of me. If this marriage was not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
, I could have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
there. I can understand that how you will be feeling right
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now
.

Anyways I will be coming in the same date of
next
month. For that I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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some
necessary arrangements of my stay
as well
as your work time. In
next
month, I will
surely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
at your place.

Convey my regards to uncle and aunty. Hoping to
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see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
truly
,

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Meera
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IELTS letter You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

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  American English
7 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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