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you are going on a short course to a training college abroad. it is a college that you have not been to before. write a letter to the accommodation officer. in your letter, give details about your course and your arrival/ departure date. explain your accommodation needs. a to ask for information about getting from the college.

you are going on a short course to a training college abroad. it is a college that you have not been to before. write a letter to the accommodation officer. in your letter, give details about your course and your arrival/ departure date. explain your accommodation needs. a to ask for information about getting from the college. rpWn
Dear sir/madam, I am writing this letter to have some information about the studio that I want to rent when I arrive to France. I am traveling there for a short course in the training college of Cote d'Azur. In this case, I will travel to Nice on march 30th at 3: 00 o'clock and arrive there at 5: 00. And I mention that the training course starts on march 30th and finishes on may 30th, so I will stay there for two months. For my stay in Nice, I need a small studio near to the training college. I prefer that the studio will be furnished and have a private kitchen and bathroom. In addition to that, If the studio will be beside the college it will be great. Also I want to know the rent price per month for the apartment and if it includes water, electricity and internet. Knowing that the training course will last till 8: 00 PM every day so it will be difficult for me to find cheap taxis at this time so please provide me with more information about the cheapest public transportation means there. Waiting your response to send you the documents and make a reservation for the studio. yours faithfully,
Dear sir/madam, I am writing this letter to have
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some
information about the
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studio
that I want to rent when I arrive to France. I am traveling there for a short course in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
college of
'Cote d'Azur' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "Côte d'Azur"
Cote d'Azur
.
In this case
, I will travel to Nice on
The month "March" needs to be capitalized.
march
30th at
Wrong phrase. Use "3:00" or "3 o'clock".
3: 00 o'clock
and arrive there at 5: 00. And I mention that the
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training
course
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starts
on
The month "March" needs to be capitalized.
march
30th and finishes on
The month "May" needs to be capitalized.
may
30th,
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so
I will stay there for two months. For my stay in Nice, I need a
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small
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studio
near to the
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training
college. I prefer that the
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studio
will
be furnished
and have a private kitchen and bathroom.
In addition
to that, If the
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studio
will be beside the college it will be great.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
I want to know the rent price per month for the apartment and if it includes water, electricity and internet. Knowing that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
course will last till 8: 00 PM every day
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it will be difficult for me to find
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cheap
taxis at this time
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so
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please
provide me with more information about the cheapest public transportation means there. Waiting your response to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
you the documents and
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make
a reservation for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studio
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter you are going on a short course to a training college abroad. it is a college that you have not been to before. write a letter to the accommodation officer. in your letter, give details about your course and your arrival/ departure date. explain your accommodation needs. a to ask for information about getting from the college.

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