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Dear Mr. Shah I am one of your students from the evening course on PHP programing language at Gujarat University. I am writing to inform you that I can no longer attend your evening lectures due to the recent work pressure from my job, but I am willing to complete the course. I have been working in your company as a senior developer in the coding section for the past three years. Until now, I have never faced an issue related to my timing which commences at 9 am and ends at 4 pm. However, I have recently been assigned to some new tasks in my office and I cannot leave my desk before 7: 30 pm. Hence, I cannot continue this course as the timing contradicts my office hours. As a solution, I would request you to let me continue it online. I have already talked to the admin manager. If you permit me to continue it online, I will be able to watch the recorded lectures and attend the final exam at the end of this course. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Smith Joe

Dear Mr. Shah

I am one of your students from the evening course on PHP Possible spelling mistake found.programming
programing
 language at Gujarat University. I am writing to inform you that I can no longer attend your evening lectures due to the recent work pressure from my job, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I am willing to complete the course.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have been working in your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 as a senior developer in the coding section for the past three years. Until This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, I have never faced an issue related to my timing which commences at 9 am and ends at 4 pm. However
, I have recently been assigned
 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 new tasks in my office and I cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 my desk This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 7: 30 pm. Hence
, I cannot continue this course as the timing contradicts my office hours.

As a solution, I would request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me continue it online. I have already talked to the admin manager. If you permit me to continue it online, I will be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 the recorded lectures and attend the final exam at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this course.

I am looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours sincerely
,

Smith Joe