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write a letter to your friend to explain about that left your wallet

write a letter to your friend to explain about that left your wallet KyjWN

Hey Jack, We had a good time in the last week holidays. We went to mountain trucking which I did not expect it. We spent whole day in that mountain itself and another day roaming in downtown in your town which was awesome. We had met the famous Indian actor Kamal in that same restaurant and took selfi with him, which was unforgettable, I want to thank you once again which you have given the great time pass. Well, I would like to let you know that I missed my money purse while leaving from your home. I remembered, I would keep my purse in your dining table while having tea, since I took out my purse from my pant pocket during that time. Please have a look and keep it with you safely now. it has lot of visiting cards, bank cards and other important stuffs. Just enquired that one of my neighbors his name is Mr. Jean is coming to your office tomorrow. Can you give my purse to him, so that I can collect from him in the evening time. Pls do video call me while giving to ensure the right person is receiving from you. Regards John.

Hey Jack,

We had a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 in the last week holidays. We went to mountain trucking which I did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 it. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
We
 spent whole day in that mountain itself and another day roaming in downtown in your town which was awesome. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
We
 had met the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 Indian actor Kamal in that same restaurant and took Possible spelling mistake found.selfselfieself i
selfi
 with him, which was unforgettable, I want to thank you once again which you have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 the great You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 pass.

Well, I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that I missed my money You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpocketbookpocketwalletbaghandbagpouch
purse
 while leaving from your home. I remembered, I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpocketbookpocketwalletbaghandbagpouch
purse
 in your dining table while having tea, since I took out my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpocketbookpocketwalletbaghandbagpouch
purse
 from my pant pocket during that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 have a look and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 it with you safely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 has It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
 visiting cards, bank cards and other This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 stuffs.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquired' is British English.inquired
enquired
 that one of my neighbors his name is Mr. Jean is coming to your office tomorrow. Can you give my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpocketbookpocketwalletbaghandbagpouch
purse
 to him, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can collect from him in the evening You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
. Possible spelling mistake found.PleasePLSPlusPCsPasPly
Pls
 do video call me while giving to ensure the right person is receiving from you.

Regards

John. 