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write a letter to your friend to explain about that left your wallet

write a letter to your friend to explain about that left your wallet KyjWN
Hey Jack, We had a good time in the last week holidays. We went to mountain trucking which I did not expect it. We spent whole day in that mountain itself and another day roaming in downtown in your town which was awesome. We had met the famous Indian actor Kamal in that same restaurant and took selfi with him, which was unforgettable, I want to thank you once again which you have given the great time pass. Well, I would like to let you know that I missed my money purse while leaving from your home. I remembered, I would keep my purse in your dining table while having tea, since I took out my purse from my pant pocket during that time. Please have a look and keep it with you safely now. it has lot of visiting cards, bank cards and other important stuffs. Just enquired that one of my neighbors his name is Mr. Jean is coming to your office tomorrow. Can you give my purse to him, so that I can collect from him in the evening time. Pls do video call me while giving to ensure the right person is receiving from you. Regards John.
Hey Jack,

We had a
good
time
in the last week holidays. We went to mountain trucking which I did not
expect
it.
We
spent whole day in that mountain itself and another day roaming in downtown in your town which was awesome.
We
had met the
famous
Indian actor Kamal in that same restaurant and took
selfi
with him, which was unforgettable, I want to thank you once again which you have
given
the great
time
pass.

Well, I would like to
let
you know that I missed my money
purse
while leaving from your home. I remembered, I would
keep
my
purse
in your dining table while having tea, since I took out my
purse
from my pant pocket during that
time
.
Please
have a look and
keep
it with you
safely
now
.
it
has
lot of
visiting cards, bank cards and other
important
stuffs.

Just
enquired
that one of my neighbors his name is Mr. Jean is coming to your office tomorrow. Can you give my
purse
to him,
so
that I can collect from him in the evening
time
.
Pls
do video call me while giving to ensure the right person is receiving from you.

Regards

John.
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IELTS letter write a letter to your friend to explain about that left your wallet

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  American English
5 paragraphs
201 words
5.5
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