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Letter to friend for taking care of pet and house

Letter to friend for taking care of pet and house aJGnP

Dear Jim, I hope this letter finds you well. As you know I am travelling to London on 23rd of September early morning. I will be back after a week, I am really glad to have a friend like you who have agreeded to take care of my house not just the house morever my dog Rusty. Truly said - A friend in need is a friend in deed. Well you dont need to panic as Rusty is a very friendly and cooperative pitbull I have ever came across. As I am leaving early Morning and I expect you to be here by 7am please feed him the breakfast which is kept near the fridge. Please make sure you weight the food before feeding as he is already obese. I am keeping an eye on how much to feed him. Please make sure you take him on a walk right away his feeding as I don't want to poo in the house. The weight Machine is kept in the drawer near the Sink. Although two handul food will suffice. Also, please use his bed in the night which is kept in the store room. Usually it gets very cold in the night so I normally have him sleep on his bed else he become restless. n Apart from this please shower the flower and garden and please keep the CCTV Camera's open. I am really thankful in advance for it. I will see you soon. Thanks

Dear Jim,

I hope this letter finds you well. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 you know I am travelling to London on 23rd of September early morning.

I will be back after a week, I am really
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agreeded
 to take care of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
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morever
 my dog Rusty.

Truly
 said Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 A friend in need is a friend in deed.

Well you Possible spelling mistake founddon't
dont
 need to panic as Rusty is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 friendly and cooperative Possible spelling mistake found.pit bull
pitbull
 I have ever came across.

As I am leaving early Morning and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 you to be here by 7am You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsatisfygratifyamuseticklecheerentertain
please
 feed him the breakfast which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 near the fridge. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsatisfygratifyamuseticklecheerentertain
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure you weight the food This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 feeding as he is already obese.

I am keeping an eye on how much to feed him. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsatisfygratifyamuseticklecheerentertain
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure you take him on a walk right away his feeding as I don't want to poo in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
.

The weight Machine is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in the drawer near the Sink. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
 two Possible spelling mistake found.handfulHandelHangul
handul
 food will suffice.

Also
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsatisfygratifyamuseticklecheerentertain
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 his bed in the night which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in the store room. Usually
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 in the night This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I normally
 have him sleep on his bed else he become restless.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterN
n


Apart from this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsatisfygratifyamuseticklecheerentertain
please
 shower the flower and garden and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsatisfygratifyamuseticklecheerentertain
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the CCTV Camera's open.

I am really
 thankful in advance for it.

I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Thanks