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Dear Sir/ Madam I am writing in connection with the Sandwich Maker bought from your MG road shop two days ago. I opened the carton yesterday at home; the product looked good from the outside. However, on use, it appears defective. The two-color light indicators on the top resemble different procedures in process. While the green light lits up when the sandwich is in the making; the red one lits up once the cooking process is complete. However, the sandwich maker I have keeps on showing the green light even though the sandwich was ready. I approached the shop executive over the call; however, could not get a satisfactory solution. On insisting further, the person asked me to visit the showroom with the product for necessary inspection. I explained how difficult it will be for me to travel 20 KMs just for the examination of the appliance and requested a home visit, which is most often than not provided by such retail shops. To my surprise, the request was put down by the executive right away. I request you to immediately arrange a technically sound engineer for inspection at my home latest by Saturday, two days from now. If no action is taken within this time, I shall take this up with the higher authorities of the showroom. Yours Faithfully Joanne Paul

Dear Sir/ Madam

I am writing in connection with the Sandwich Maker This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your MG road shop two days ago.

I opened the carton yesterday at home; the product looked This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 from the outside. However
, on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
, it appears defective. The two-color light indicators on the top resemble This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 procedures in process. While the green light Possible spelling mistake found.itslieslisthitslistssits
lits
 up when the sandwich is in the making; the red one Possible spelling mistake found.itslieslisthitslistssits
lits
 up once the cooking process is complete. However
, the sandwich maker I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 on showing the green light even though
 the sandwich was ready.

I approached the shop executive over the call; however
, could not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a satisfactory solution. On insisting further
, the person asked me to visit the showroom with the product for necessary inspection. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpreted
explained
 how difficult it will be for me to travel 20 Possible spelling mistake found.KMSKmRMSSMSDMSKBS
KMs
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 for the examination of the appliance and requested a home visit, which is most Use "oftener" to make a comparison with this adjective.oftener
often
 than not provided by such retail shops. To my surprise, the request was put
 down by the executive right away.

I request you to immediately arrange a technically
 sound engineer for inspection at my home latest by Saturday, two days from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. If no action is taken
 within this time, I shall take this up with the higher authorities of the showroom.

Yours Faithfully


Joanne Paul