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Dear Sir/ Madam I am writing in connection with the Sandwich Maker bought from your MG road shop two days ago. I opened the carton yesterday at home; the product looked good from the outside. However, on use, it appears defective. The two-color light indicators on the top resemble different procedures in process. While the green light lits up when the sandwich is in the making; the red one lits up once the cooking process is complete. However, the sandwich maker I have keeps on showing the green light even though the sandwich was ready. I approached the shop executive over the call; however, could not get a satisfactory solution. On insisting further, the person asked me to visit the showroom with the product for necessary inspection. I explained how difficult it will be for me to travel 20 KMs just for the examination of the appliance and requested a home visit, which is most often than not provided by such retail shops. To my surprise, the request was put down by the executive right away. I request you to immediately arrange a technically sound engineer for inspection at my home latest by Saturday, two days from now. If no action is taken within this time, I shall take this up with the higher authorities of the showroom. Yours Faithfully Joanne Paul
Dear Sir/ Madam

I am writing in connection with the Sandwich Maker
bought
from your MG road shop two days ago.

I opened the carton yesterday at home; the product looked
good
from the outside.
However
, on
use
, it appears defective. The two-color light indicators on the top resemble
different
procedures in process. While the green light
lits
up when the sandwich is in the making; the red one
lits
up once the cooking process is complete.
However
, the sandwich maker I have
keeps
on showing the green light
even though
the sandwich was ready.

I approached the shop executive over the call;
however
, could not
get
a satisfactory solution. On insisting
further
, the person asked me to visit the showroom with the product for necessary inspection. I
explained
how difficult it will be for me to travel 20
KMs
just
for the examination of the appliance and requested a home visit, which is most
often
than not provided by such retail shops. To my surprise, the request
was put
down by the executive right away.

I request you to immediately arrange a
technically
sound engineer for inspection at my home latest by Saturday, two days from
now
. If no action
is taken
within this time, I shall take this up with the higher authorities of the showroom.

Yours
Faithfully


Joanne Paul
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