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You are living in your friend’s apartment while he is going on a holiday. In your letter include: -Why you are writing -What you break anything -Apologize for your mistake and how you can give him as a r eplacement

You are living in your friend’s apartment while he is going on a holiday. In your letter include: -Why you are writing -What you break anything -Apologize for your mistake and how you can give him as a r eplacement jbJg8
Dear Jean, I hope you’re thoroughly enjoying your vacation. It’s been a month you have been travelling since our last time meeting and it is so wonderful and touched for letting me stay your house while you are away. However, it is so ridiculous to tell you and want to apologise that I accidentally broke your favourite mug cup while I was preparing for my dinner. At that moment, my boss suddenly called me for an emergency job so I rushed myself to finish my meal as soon as possible. As a consequence, I crashed down the table that can make your cup split into pieces by falling onto the ground. I am really sorry to disturb your relaxation by telling it but I have tried my best to purchase a cup that precisely looks like this. However, it is really difficult as it is a limited cup. I really regret my mistake and even though we are best friends, I desire to give you something as a compensation. I hope you can understand my situation and please consider what you want as a replacement. Please take care of yourself and enjoy your holidays fully. Your friend, Lara
Dear Jean,

I hope you’re
thoroughly
enjoying your vacation. It’s been a month you have been travelling since our last time meeting and it is
so
wonderful and touched for letting me stay your
house
while you are away.

However
, it is
so
ridiculous to
tell
you and want to
apologise
that I
accidentally
broke your
favourite
mug
cup
while I was preparing for my dinner. At that moment, my boss
suddenly
called me for an emergency job
so
I rushed myself to finish my meal as
soon
as possible. As a consequence, I crashed down the table that can
make
your
cup
split into pieces by falling onto the ground.

I am
really
sorry to disturb your relaxation by telling it
but
I have tried my best to
purchase
a
cup
that
precisely
looks like this.
However
, it is
really
difficult as it is a limited
cup
. I
really
regret my mistake and
even though
we are best friends, I desire to give you something as a compensation.

I hope you can understand my situation and
please
consider what you want as a replacement.
Please
take care of yourself and enjoy your holidays
fully
.

Your friend,

Lara
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IELTS letter You are living in your friend’s apartment while he is going on a holiday. In your letter include: -Why you are writing -What you break anything -Apologize for your mistake and how you can give him as a r eplacement

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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