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Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out whether a refund is possible if you leave early

Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out whether a refund is possible if you leave early 6Lr5l
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in refernce to an Online advertisment on Tennis course, posted on your facebook page. I am a passionate tennis player and I am looking forward to enrolling myself in the tennis course. The details of the course stated that it will start from January and will end in April. I am not a permanent resident here and i will be taking a flight back to my own country on 30th March. Therefore, i will not be abe to take the entire course. I was wondering if a refund can be arranged for the sessions i do not attend. I have plans to visit again after 6 months and i will ensure to stay the entire course that time. Thank you for your understanding and i look forward to hearing from you! Yours faithfully, Geeta Arora
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in
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refernce
to an Online
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advertisment
on Tennis
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course
, posted on your
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facebook
page. I am a passionate tennis
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player and
I am looking forward to enrolling myself in the tennis course.

The
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details
of the
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course
stated that it will
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start
from January and will
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end
in April. I am not a permanent resident here and
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i
will be taking a flight back to my
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own
country on 30th March.
Therefore
,
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i
will not be
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abe
to take the entire
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. I was wondering if a refund can
be arranged
for the sessions
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i
do not attend. I have plans to visit again after 6 months and
Did you mean "I"?
i
will ensure to stay the entire
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
that time.

Thank you for your understanding and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
look forward to hearing from you!

Yours
faithfully
,

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Geeta
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Arora

IELTS letter Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out whether a refund is possible if you leave early

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  American English
6 paragraphs
141 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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