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Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out whether a refund is possible if you leave early

Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out whether a refund is possible if you leave early 6Lr5l
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in refernce to an Online advertisment on Tennis course, posted on your facebook page. I am a passionate tennis player and I am looking forward to enrolling myself in the tennis course. The details of the course stated that it will start from January and will end in April. I am not a permanent resident here and i will be taking a flight back to my own country on 30th March. Therefore, i will not be abe to take the entire course. I was wondering if a refund can be arranged for the sessions i do not attend. I have plans to visit again after 6 months and i will ensure to stay the entire course that time. Thank you for your understanding and i look forward to hearing from you! Yours faithfully, Geeta Arora
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in
refernce
to an Online
advertisment
on Tennis
course
, posted on your
facebook
page. I am a passionate tennis
player and
I am looking forward to enrolling myself in the tennis course.

The
details
of the
course
stated that it will
start
from January and will
end
in April. I am not a permanent resident here and
i
will be taking a flight back to my
own
country on 30th March.
Therefore
,
i
will not be
abe
to take the entire
course
. I was wondering if a refund can
be arranged
for the sessions
i
do not attend. I have plans to visit again after 6 months and
i
will ensure to stay the entire
course
that time.

Thank you for your understanding and
i
look forward to hearing from you!

Yours
faithfully
,

Geeta
Arora
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out whether a refund is possible if you leave early

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
141 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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