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You currently work full-time in a company but would like to change to working part-time. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you would like to change to working part-time work • say what times and days of the week would suit you best • suggest how your work could be covered or completed if you work part-time

You currently work full-time in a company but would like to change to working part-time. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you would like to change to working part-time work • say what times and days of the week would suit you best • suggest how your work could be covered or completed if you work part-time 151QL

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing it to request you to switch my full-time job to part-time due to I have recently been nurturing my newborn boy. Therefore, I would not get an adequate spell to spend all day working as I am feeding to him. I can complete my duties in half of the day. However, as a mother, the four to five hours per day suits me best and I can work for fives days a week. Although It would not go so long, I exclusively required six months of a part-time job, after that, I will be available for all hours and flexible days. In the absence of my position, I have talked to Ms Richa about all responsibilities including my key role. She will be available to complete the tasks for rest of the day. For any emergency task, my cellphone will always on to answers. I would be grateful to receive a beneficial response from your side. Yours Sincerely,

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing it to request you to switch my full-time job to part-time due to I have recently been nurturing my newborn boy. Therefore
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get
 an adequate spell to spend all day working as I am feeding to him. I can complete my duties in half of the day.

However
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so
 long, I exclusively required six months of a part-time job, after that, I will be available for all hours and flexible days.

In the absence of my position, I have talked to Ms Possible spelling mistake found.RicheyRichRochaRich a
Richa
 about all responsibilities including my key role. She will be available to complete the tasks for rest of the day. For any emergency task, my cellphone will always on to answers.

I would be grateful to receive a beneficial response from your side.

Yours Sincerely
, 

IELTS letter You currently work full-time in a company but would like to change to working part-time. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you would like to change to working part-time work • say what times and days of the week would suit you best • suggest how your work could be covered or completed if you work part-time

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

164 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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