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You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.

You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. YL2jB

I am writing this letter to express my disappointment about the plan to make our local airport bigger and enhance the number of flights. I learnt about this in the article in your newspaper. I am a resident of Model Town. On behalf of the residents of Model town, I want to raise concern over the plan of authorities to extend the local airport As this plan will allow authorities to cut trees for clearing space for the construction. Moreover, the decision to increase the number of flights will result in addition to noise pollution in the area. Already, people of this locality have been suffering from this issue. I urge you to write an article regarding the difficulties that will be faced by them on the implementation of the plan. I believe that with the power of your pen we can put pressure on the official to revoke this plan of extension to the airport facilities and save local residents from the negative impact of this plan. Hoping for prompt action from you on this matter. Yours sincerely, kiran.

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