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You caused some damages in kitchen area of your flat.Write a letter to your landlord explaining the following .How the damage occurred,the extent of damage,What you would like your landlord to do.

You caused some damages in kitchen area of your flat. Write a letter to your landlord explaining the following. How the damage occurred, the extent of damage, What you would like your landlord to do. n6glo

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to apologise for some damages that I accidentally caused in the kitchen, and to request you to get them fixed as soon as possible. I am sandy, my apartment number is 1123, window town. I came in this apartment last week from India. I was not aware of the smoke alarm system, and I started making paratha which is an Indian flatbread. When I was trying smoking was coming out then fire alarm started beeping and would not stop. In that situation, I was in panic I tried to remove it, and it's screw broken and it fell down on the floor. As I am mindful that without smoke alarm to use of kitchen is risky. I want to tell you that damages are not major, but need immediate attention. It would be very kind of you if you could get this issue, caused by me, fixed early. I will be very grateful to you. Hoping for a kind consideration from you regards this matter. Yours faithfully, Sandy

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.apologize
apologise
 for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 damages that I accidentally
 caused in the kitchen, and to request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. I am sandy, my apartment number is 1123, window town.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 came in this apartment last week from India. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was not aware of the smoke alarm system, and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 making Possible spelling mistake found.Maratha
paratha
 which is an Indian flatbread. When I was trying smoking was coming out then fire alarm This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 beeping and would not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
. In that situation, I was in panic I tried to remove it, and it's screw broken and it fell down on the floor. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 I am mindful that without smoke alarm to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of kitchen is risky.

I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you that damages are not major, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 need immediate attention. It would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 kind of you if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 this issue, caused by me, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 early. I will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 grateful to you.

Hoping for a kind consideration from you regards this matter.

Yours faithfully
,

Sandy