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Advantages or disadvantages to being part of a large family in the past

Advantages or disadvantages to being part of a large family in the past RNQ9V
History has shown that in the past, people had many children. It's much different now than it was then. I think it's good to have a big family. You need to think about the financial side of things, but there are also many positive aspects. Again I know everyone has a personal opinion. Must take after someone. Maybe that’s why I like living in a big family. Although I live in a small family. To follow in someone's footstep. You learn from them what you don't know. You can see the good in them and the bad in them. In short, one big happy family is good.
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children. It's much
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different
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than it was then. I
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think
it's
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good
to have a
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big
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family
. You need to
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think
about the financial side of things,
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there are
also
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many
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positive
aspects. Again I know everyone has a personal opinion.
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Must
take after someone. Maybe that’s why I like living in a
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big
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family
.
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Although
I
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live
in a
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small
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family
. To follow in someone's footstep. You learn from them what you don't know. You can
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see
the
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good
in them and the
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bad
in them. In short, one
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big
happy
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family
is
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good
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IELTS letter Advantages or disadvantages to being part of a large family in the past

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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