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Your friend has taken the responsibility of your house and pet in your absence. In your letter, mention contact details. Also mention how to take care of pet and household duties.

Your friend has taken the responsibility of your house and pet in your absence. In your letter, mention contact details. Also mention how to take care of pet and household duties. 3apgm
Dear Lucy, How are you doing. I am so relieved that you took the responsibility of my pet cat in my absence. Also, I am so tension free about my house due to the fact it's you who will be there. Firstly my contact number during my trip to Paris would change. I will give you once I rent a sim here. Till that time, you can stay in touch through internet calls. Something very important about my cat Shiny, you got to feed her twice a day. In morning, fill her water cup with milk and give her some cat food which you will find in kitchen first cabinet below the shef in a jar. At night, fill her water cup with water and give her some pet food again. In the evening, if you can take her for a walk, she would stay less jumpy. The house safety you know, keep the windows and door closed at night for safety. One thing if you could do, which would make me really happy is watering the plants in the balcony every day. Rest where to find what I have added it on my stickers on fridge. Please check those stickers on fridge in case you get lost in the house. Hoping that you will have a fun time in my absence. In case you want to ask anything, I am just a call away. Looking forward to meet you after a week. Yours loving, Karishma
Dear Lucy, How are you doing. I am
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relieved that you took the responsibility of my pet cat in my absence.
Also
, I am
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so
tension free about my
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house
due to the fact it's you who will be there.
Firstly
my contact number during my trip to Paris would
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change
. I will give you once I rent a sim here. Till that time, you can stay in touch through internet calls. Something
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very
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important
about my cat Shiny, you
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got
to feed her twice a day. In morning, fill her water cup with milk and give her
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some
cat food which you will find in kitchen
first
cabinet below the
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shef
in a jar. At night, fill her water cup with water and give her
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some
pet food again. In the evening, if you can take her for a walk, she would stay less jumpy. The
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house
safety you know,
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keep
the windows and door closed at night for safety. One thing if you could do, which would
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make
me
really
happy is watering the plants in the balcony every day. Rest where to find what I have
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added
it on my stickers on fridge.
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Please
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check
those stickers on fridge in case you
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get
lost in the
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house
. Hoping that you will have a fun time in my absence. In case you want to ask anything, I am
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just
a call away. Looking forward to
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meet
you after a week. Yours loving,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Karishma
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IELTS letter Your friend has taken the responsibility of your house and pet in your absence. In your letter, mention contact details. Also mention how to take care of pet and household duties.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
245 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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