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Write a letter to your manager in your letter describe the training course you want to do,explain what compnay could do to help you,say how it is helpful for you job

Write a letter to your manager in your letter describe the training course you want to do, explain what compnay could do to help you, say how it is helpful for you job xmdey
Respected sir/ madam my name is Razia and i have been working as lecturer of statistics in your organization for last five years under your kind control. Last Sunday, i have seen an advertisment about the teacher training in 'JHang newspaper'. Today, I am writting this letter to express my interest in this course and ask your favor regardind this matter. Actually, Last sunday I have seen an adavertisment o Advance Teacher Training progrma which is going to held on next month. I have a keen interest in this session and duration of this course is bout 2 weeks. As you know I am an industerious and enthusiastic employee. During my whole services I always remain punctual and never avail any extra vacations. . Now, i would like to ask you could you please grant me leaves for at least 15 days so that i could be abke to take part in this course. Moreover, the cost of this traninig module is very high and I am unable to afford the expenditure of whole workshop owing to my meagre salary. Consequently, I request the company to allocate some funds to fulfill my this desire. I am sure that this workshop will immunse benefits in my professional growth and development. It might be helpfull in exploring advance skills, innovation and knowledge. I hope I will be able to work from down deep to earth in a better way for progress of our organization. I am looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Razia
Respected sir/ madam my name is
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Razia
and
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i
have been working as lecturer of statistics in your organization for last five years under your kind control. Last Sunday,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have
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seen
an
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advertisment
about the teacher training in '
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JHang
newspaper'.
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Today
, I am
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writting
this letter to express my interest in this course and ask your favor
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regardind
this matter.

Actually, Last
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sunday
I have
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seen
an
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adavertisment
o Advance Teacher Training
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progrma
which is going to
'Going to' requires the base form: "hold"
held
on
next
month. I have a keen interest in this session and duration of this course is bout 2 weeks.

As you know I am an
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industerious
and enthusiastic employee. During my whole services I always remain punctual and never avail any extra vacations.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
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Now
,
Did you mean "I"?
i
would like to ask you could you
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please
grant me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leaves
for at least 15 days
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so
that
Did you mean "I"?
i
could be
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abke
to
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take part
in this course.
Moreover
, the cost of this
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traninig
module is
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very
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
high and
I am unable to afford the expenditure of whole workshop owing to my
Possible spelling mistake. 'meagre' is British English.
meagre
salary.
Consequently
, I request the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
to allocate
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
funds to fulfill my this desire. I am sure that this workshop will
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immunse
benefits in my professional growth and development. It might be
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helpfull
in exploring advance
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, innovation and knowledge. I hope I will be able to work from down deep to earth in a better way for progress of our organization.

I am looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Razia
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager in your letter describe the training course you want to do, explain what compnay could do to help you, say how it is helpful for you job

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  American English
5 paragraphs
252 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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