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Letter to friend for invitation to weeding.

Letter to friend for invitation to weeding. pRoV2
Dear Anada, Hope you are doing great! It is been a long time that we have met. I am hoping you are having a great time in your home town. You will be really happy to read that I am getting married in the coming month. I have already shared with you about Gaurav, a friend of mine since childhood. He purposed me for marriage and I said yes. Our families are happy with this decision too. Weeding is on 22nd June. There will be a party in a banquet hall called celebration plaza on this day after weeding. There will be a cocktail party too after this. A night before there will be a bachelors party and you have to attend this too. We friends will enjoy and dance. You are completely aware that I have a few friends. You are one of my closest friend. You were always interested in attending an Indian marriage. Rituals and ceremonies amaze you. This is a great opportunity for you to enjoy these. You have to attend my weeding. I am waiting for you reply. Try to book your tickets as soon as possible. Yours truly, Priya.
Dear
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Anada
, Hope you are doing great! It
is been
a long time that we have met. I am hoping you are having a great time in your home town. You will be
really
happy to read that I am getting married in the coming month. I have already shared with you about Gaurav, a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friend
of mine since childhood. He purposed me for marriage and I said yes. Our families are happy with this decision too. Weeding is on 22nd June. There will be a party in a banquet hall called celebration plaza on this day after weeding. There will be a cocktail party too after this. A night
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
there will be a bachelors party and you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
attend this too. We
The pronoun 'We' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "friend"
friends
will enjoy and dance. You are completely aware that I have a few
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
. You are one of my closest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friend
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
You
were always interested in attending an Indian marriage. Rituals and ceremonies amaze you. This is a great opportunity for you to enjoy these. You
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
attend my weeding. I am waiting for you reply. Try to book your tickets as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible. Yours
truly
, Priya.
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IELTS letter Letter to friend for invitation to weeding.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
195 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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