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Information regarding Hostel accommodation

Information regarding Hostel accommodation m1aDN
Dear Sir/ Madam This is to inform you that I am Hardeep Singh from as Lecture at DAV college in Mohali. i want you know about some information regarding Accommodation at your hostel during our visit to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales. I am in charge of the trip of the group of students. We are planning to take trip to Canada Next month and we stay there 11th to 20th Dec after that visit during some exercises Area Reading College Studies tasks, so we have to planned to stay your hostel on 10 Days which I already mention Above. We are 25 student and 5 Lecturer and 1 Helper with Driver so we required accommodation of 13 Double bedroom and if we get room with Attached washroom and kitchen so it’s better for us because some student prefer cook of themselves. If is there any good local Restaurant and also let me know about the cost of room. Please reply me soon the availability for your hostel accommodation and if they are available or not, we are wating waiting for you reply Thanks, you Your faithfully Hardeep singh
Dear Sir/ Madam

This is to inform you that I am
Hardeep
Singh from as Lecture at DAV college in
Mohali
.
i
want you know about
some
information regarding Accommodation at your hostel during our visit to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales. I am in charge of the trip of the group of students.

We are planning to take trip to Canada
Next
month and
we stay there 11th to 20th Dec after that visit during
some
exercises Area Reading College Studies tasks,
so
we
have to
planned to stay your hostel on 10 Days which I already mention Above.

We are 25 student and 5
Lecturer
and 1 Helper with Driver
so
we required accommodation of 13 Double bedroom and if we
get
room with Attached washroom and kitchen
so
it’s better for us
because
some
student
prefer cook of themselves. If is there any
good
local Restaurant and
also
let
me know about the cost of room.

Please
reply me
soon
the availability for your hostel accommodation and if they are available or not, we are
wating
waiting for you reply

Thanks, you

Your
faithfully


Hardeep
singh
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IELTS letter Information regarding Hostel accommodation

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
190 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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