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You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer express you gratitude explain you like your current job very much

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am writing to you to express my regret for not being able to accept your job offer. Earlier, I have been offered the regional sales manager position at your firm with annual pay of $80, 000. I would like to thank you for considering me for the job. My experience with you and your staff throughout the evaluation process has been very cordial and amicable. I am sorry for all the inconvenience caused and for wasting your precious time and energy in evaluating mein the process. Although your offer is competitive, it is not enough for me to move from my current organization. By accepting the offer, I will have to not only relocation relocate to another city but also have to give up many of my valuable contacts in the current region, which are crucial in a sales career. Also in my present job, I earn higher commissions which offset my lower salary. I, therefore, am not able to accept your otherwise munificent offer.

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offer
. Earlier, I have been offered
 the regional sales manager position at your firm with annual pay of $80, 000.

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enough
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move
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 organization. By accepting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withovertureactionbidattempt
offer
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have to
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only
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have to
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 of my valuable contacts in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 region, which are crucial in a sales career. Also
 in my present job, I earn higher commissions which offset my lower salary. I, therefore
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