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You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer express you gratitude explain you like your current job very much

Dear Sir/Madam, I have received an offer letter for the role software engineer from your esteemed organization. The objective of writing this letter is to let you know that I will not be accepting this offer as the company location is far from my house. I am really thankful for the job offer from your side. During this pandemic, it is very difficult to get a new job, and a lot of aspirants are trying hard to get one. The only thing is that I am not considering the offer at this point of time due to the long travel required to reach the office. My present company does not want me leave now as some critical work going on now. Since I have been working there for the past six years I have some commitment towards the management. Also, the office is very near to my house, so that I can easily reach there on time. Thank you for the consideration and hope we can work together in the future. Yours faithfully, Maria.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I have received an
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offer
letter for the role software engineer from your esteemed organization. The objective of writing this letter is to
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let
you know that I will not be accepting this
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offer
as the
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company
location is far from my
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house
.

I am
really
thankful for the job
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offer
from your side. During this pandemic, it is
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very
difficult to
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get
a new job, and
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aspirants are trying
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hard
to
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get
one. The
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only
thing is that I am not considering the
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offer
at this point of time due to the long travel required to reach the office.

My present
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company
does not want me
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leave
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now
as
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some
critical work going on
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now
. Since I have been working there for the past six years I have
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some
commitment towards the management.
Also
, the office is
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very
near to my
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house
,
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so
that I can
easily
reach there on time.

Thank you for the consideration and hope we can work together in the future.

Yours
faithfully
,

Maria.

IELTS letter You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer express you gratitude explain you like your current job very much

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  American English
7 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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