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you have recently attended a 90th birthday party if a close relative. it was successfully organised by hotel staff. write a letter to the manager and say -describe the event. -Talk about the facilites provided to guests, especially the elderly. -mention a particular employee whose service was great.

Dear Mr. , I am writing this letter on behalf of my grandmother who celebrated her 90th birthday two days ago. I would like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude for the party you managed. I would like to mention that the event was glamorous, and everyone was satisfied. Besides, the design of cake and tables was outstanding. Moreover, scheduling and timing of everything are absolutely accurate. From my perspective, the best section of the party was a moment when staff encouraging elderly people to participate in the dance on the dance platform. Perhaps you should be informed that equipment and facilities for elderly people was acceptable, especially, wheelchair that your employees provided for senior guests. In addition, sound equipment had a high quality which is not comparable with other sounds equipment I have ever heard in my life. I should let you know that most of the employees did their duties in the best way. As a matter of fact, the best group of employees was waitresses and waiters who serviced to the guests immediately without any hesitations, especially, one of them, whose name is Jim (who was) very responsible. Also, Jim was very patient to all guests and responded all requests as soon as possible. I would like to give special thanks to Jim for all things he did during the party. Yours faithfully, Mehdi Farokhtabar
Dear Mr.
,


I am writing this letter on behalf of my grandmother who celebrated her 90th birthday two days ago. I would like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude for the party you managed.

I
would like to mention that the
event
was glamorous, and everyone
was satisfied
.
Besides
, the design of cake and tables was outstanding.
Moreover
, scheduling and timing of everything are
absolutely
accurate. From my perspective, the best section of the party was a moment when staff encouraging elderly
people
to participate in the dance on the dance platform.

Perhaps you should
be informed
that equipment and facilities for elderly
people
was acceptable,
especially
, wheelchair that your employees provided for senior guests.
In addition
, sound equipment had a high quality which is not comparable with other sounds equipment I have ever heard in my life.

I should
let
you know that most of the employees did their duties in the best way. As a matter of fact, the best group of employees was waitresses and waiters who serviced to the guests immediately without any hesitations,
especially
, one of them, whose name is Jim (who was)
very
responsible.
Also
, Jim was
very
patient to all guests and responded all requests as
soon
as possible. I would like to give special thanks to Jim for all things he did during the party.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mehdi
Farokhtabar
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IELTS letter you have recently attended a 90th birthday party if a close relative. it was successfully organised by hotel staff. write a letter to the manager and say -describe the event. -Talk about the facilites provided to guests, especially the elderly. -mention a particular employee whose service was great.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
229 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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