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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to ask my queries on electronic equipment in your store Recently, I read an advertisement for abundance of electronic items available in your shop. I am bedazzled by looking at the images of items. I want to know whether you have a microwave in your market? I am a working woman and microwave is best to get hot food instantly. If the item I want is not available in your shop is it possible for you to arrange it for me? Secondly, I want to know the price of the item so that I can match it with my monthly budget. Additionally, your shop is nearby my town so the shipment is available for that area? Right now I am in another state of Canada so, for how long can you hold my parcel to deliver after confirmation? Yours faithfully,

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to ask my queries on electronic equipment in your store

Recently, I read an advertisement for abundance of electronic items available in your shop. I am bedazzled
 by looking at the images of items.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 want to know whether you have a microwave in your market? Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 am a working woman and microwave is best to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 hot food instantly
. If the item I want is not available in your shop is it possible for you to arrange it for me?

Secondly
, I want to know the price of the item This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can match it with my monthly budget. Additionally
, your shop is nearby my Use a comma before ‘so’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).town,
town
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the shipment is available for that area?

Right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I am in another state of Canada This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, for how long can you hold my parcel to deliver after confirmation?

Yours faithfully
, 