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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..........., You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my displeasure with your bus service that I have been availing of for the past two months. My name is Sonika. I have started using your bus service for the last two months. Initially, everything seemed great. Over two weeks from now, the bus has started to come late. As a result, I reach late for my first lecture at the college. Sometimes, I even miss it as we are not allowed to enter the classroom on coming late. I have also observed that the seats are limited on the bus. Some passengers have to stand up during their journey. I hope you and the authorities look into this matter seriously and instruct the staff to reach on time. They should not wait at the bus stop for more than 2 to 3 minutes. Most importantly, the seats should be available for all the passengers. I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours Sincerely, Sonika Dhaliwal
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my displeasure with your bus service that I have been availing of for the past two months.

My name is
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Sonika
. I have
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started
using your bus service for the last two months.
Initially
, everything seemed great. Over two weeks from
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now
, the bus has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to
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come
late.
As a result
, I reach late for my
first
lecture at the college.
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Sometimes
, I even miss it as we are not
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allowed
to enter the classroom on coming late. I have
also
observed that the seats
are limited
on the bus.
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Some
passengers
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have to
stand up during their journey.

I hope you and the authorities look into this matter
seriously
and instruct the staff to reach on time. They should not wait at the bus
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stop
for more than 2 to 3 minutes. Most
importantly
, the seats should be available for all the passengers.

I look forward to hearing back from you.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Sonika
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Dhaliwal

IELTS letter There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . ,

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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