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Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter * explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital * say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do * give details of when you would be available for this work

Dear Sir, In response to a recent advertisement broadcast on television, I am writing to express my interest in the unpaid job at your hospital. I really appreciate the management for the opportunity to do a volunteer job at the medical center. My mum is a Nurse and she devotes her professional life to serving people and society as a whole. I am highly inspired by her and I am keen to do the same for people who need medical care. I have no specialty related to medicine, but I can make myself useful in the cards and record section as well as offering guidance to patients and visitors who are not used to the hospital. I will be available to work at your hospital on weekends as I am engaged with other activities on weekdays. I will be grateful if my request is granted as a volunteer worker. Yours faithfully, Nkechi Igwe
Dear Sir,

In response to a recent advertisement broadcast on television, I am writing to express my interest in the unpaid job at your hospital. I
really
appreciate the management for the opportunity to do a volunteer job at the medical center.

My mum is a
Nurse and
she devotes her professional life to serving
people
and society as a whole. I am
highly
inspired by
her and
I am keen to do the same for
people
who need medical care.

I have no specialty related to medicine,
but
I can
make
myself useful in the cards and record section
as well
as offering guidance to patients and visitors who are not
used
to the hospital.

I
will be available to work at your hospital on weekends as I
am engaged
with other activities on weekdays.

I
will be grateful if my request
is granted
as a volunteer worker.

Yours
faithfully
,

Nkechi
Igwe
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IELTS letter Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter * explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital * say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do * give details of when you would be available for this work

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  American English
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152 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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