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You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

Dear Sir, I am writing in connection with the letter i received from your bank today in my mailbox. I was recently issued a new debit card and was informed that I will be receiving it via mail. Today I received the letter and was asked to send the acknowledgement receipt of the new card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. I really needed the card urgently as my old card has already been expired. I am very concerned about my private information on the card as nowadays even without the pin and inserting the card one can make a purchase. I called the courier company and they said that the package was sealed and wads handed over to them as it is. I really believe that while preparing the letter your bank official forgot to attach the card. if that is the case then I will be a little relieved. I would really appreciate if you check your department. Also, I would like to block that card so that no one will be able to m issue it. I request you to issue me a new card and I would like to collect it personally from the bank. kindly update me on the situation as soon as you get any information. Yours faithfullyShilakha Dhawan

Dear Sir, I am writing in connection with the letter Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 received from your bank This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 in my mailbox. I was recently issued a new debit You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 and was informed
 that I will be receiving it via mail. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
 I received the letter and was asked
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 the acknowledgement receipt of the new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
. However
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 was missing from the envelope. I really
 needed the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
urgently
 as my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 has already been expired
. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 concerned about my private information on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 as nowadays even without the pin and inserting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 one can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 called the courier Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).company, and
company and
 they said that the package was sealed
 and wads handed over to them as it is. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
really
 believe that while preparing the letter your bank official forgot to attach the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.If
if
that is
 the case then I will be a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 relieved.

I would really
 appreciate if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 your department. Also
, I would like to block that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that no one will be able to m issue it. I request you to issue me a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsheetposterlabelprogramcalendarticket
card
 and I would like to collect it personally
 from the bank. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Kindly
kindly
 update me on the situation as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 any information.

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.
faithfullyShilakha
Possible spelling mistake found.DrawnDawnDhakaShawnShamanShawna
Dhawan