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Dear Mathew, I hope you are doing well. I just wanted to let you know that due to some reasons I was obliged to change my job. Since my previous company was so small with the light turnover you don’t usually get a chance to become a professional in your field. It is monotone job as you are supposed to do the same things every single day. However, with the new company you may have your dream come true since it covers every aspects of accounting so, chances are you can definitely be a subject specialist. Besides it, it is a piece of cake if you are willing to grow in this company as long as you have all the qualities to stand out among the mass. I have another news for you. If you remember last time when you visit me 2 years ago, we checked the cars together and fond of BMW. Finally, I ended up purchasing the last model that is going to knock your sucks off for sure. Moreover, I got squared away commuting long distances to work, and stacking in congestion. Now I am in the seven heavens as I drive everywhere by my car. I am looking forward to hearing more news about you soon. Best regards, Yours Ughur
Dear Mathew,

I hope you are doing well. I
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company
was
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small
with the light turnover you don’t
usually
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get
a chance to become a professional in your field. It is monotone job as you
are supposed
to do the same things every single day.

However
, with the new
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company
you may have your dream
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come
true since it covers every
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aspects
of accounting
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so
, chances are you can definitely be a subject specialist.
Besides
it, it is a piece of cake if you are willing to grow in this
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company
as long as you have all the qualities to stand out among the mass.

I have another news for you. If you remember last time when you visit me 2 years ago, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
checked
the cars together and fond of BMW.
Finally
, I ended up purchasing the last model
that is
going to knock your sucks off for sure.
Moreover
, I
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got
squared away commuting long distances to work, and stacking in congestion.
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Now
I am in the seven heavens as I drive everywhere by my car.

I am looking forward to hearing more news about you
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soon
.

Best regards,

Yours
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Ughur
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214 words
6.0
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