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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

I am writing this letter in reply to providing feedback on the cookery class which I had accomplished. I had completed one of the trending cuisine courses which were Mexican dishes from your cookery school. The coaching provided over there was exclusive. It included all the Mexican cuisine such as Mexican rice, Mexican bhel and many more. The mesmerizing thing during the course was practical sessions which aid all the candidates to learn dishes quickly. Since I joined the class, I got various opportunities to learn many delicious food items which enhanced my cooking skills. I made a variety of scrumptious Mexican meals and every member of my family loved it. All the courses offered by you are outstanding though I would like to suggest one course which is a sweet tooth dishes. I personally recommended you to emphasize on such type of courses which will be the beloved items of children include cakes, donuts, cupcakes. I feel grateful to provide my feedback on this course. I strongly recommended you think about the above suggested course which is the most trending one recently.
I am writing this letter in reply to providing feedback on the cookery
class
which I had accomplished. I had completed one of the trending cuisine
courses
which were Mexican dishes from your cookery school.

The coaching provided over there was exclusive. It included all the Mexican cuisine such as Mexican rice, Mexican
bhel
and
many
more. The mesmerizing thing during the
course
was practical sessions which aid all the candidates to learn dishes
quickly
.

Since I
joined
the
class
, I
got
various opportunities to learn
many
delicious food items which enhanced my cooking
skills
. I made a variety of scrumptious Mexican meals and every member of my family
loved
it.

All the
courses
offered by you are outstanding though I would like to suggest one
course
which is a sweet tooth dishes. I
personally
recommended you to emphasize on such type of
courses
which will be the beloved items of children include cakes, donuts, cupcakes.

I feel grateful to provide my feedback on this
course
.
I
strongly
recommended you
think
about the above suggested
course
which is the most trending one recently.
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IELTS letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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183 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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