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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

Dear sir or madame, I am writing to you to express my dissatifaction on the services you promote on your restaurant. A friend of mine has recommend your famous restaurant at the fifth avenue as the best restaurant in the city, so i thought it was a nice idea to invite my familly to have a lunch there. Unfortunately the services was not as we expected. First, when we arrived, we choosed a table near the window in order to have a good view to the sea, we waited there for about 30 minutes and no one came to present at least the menu. Secondly when i tried to look for someone to serve us, i found a waiter, but he was busy Watching soccer on tv and he did not care about my request. I am afraid to informe you that the staff working in your property do not respect the costummers. It will be nice if you recruite a new staff there in order to protect the reputation of your restaurant Thanks for your considérationYours sincerely, William adam

Dear sir or madame,

I am writing to you to express my Possible spelling mistake found.dissatisfaction
dissatifaction
 on the services you promote on your restaurant.

A friend of mine has Use past participle here: “recommended”.recommended
recommend
 your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 restaurant at the If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Fifth Avenue
fifth avenue
 as the best restaurant in the city, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 it was a nice This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 to invite my Possible spelling mistake found.family
familly
 to When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: “have lunch”.have lunch
have a lunch
 there.

Unfortunately the services was not as we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
. First
, when we arrived, we Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean “chose”, the past tense form of the verb ‘choose’?chosechoosechooseschooser
choosed
 a table near the window in order to have a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 view to the sea, we waited there for about 30 minutes and no one came to present at least the menu. Secondly
 when Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 tried to look for someone to serve us, Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 found a waiter, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he was busy Watching soccer on Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).tv, and
tv and
 he did not care about my request.

I am afraid to Possible spelling mistake found.informedinforminformsinformer
informe
 you that the staff working in your property do not respect the Possible spelling mistake found.costumerscostumiers
costummers
. It will be nice if you Possible spelling mistake found.recruitedrecruitrecruitsrecruiter
recruite
 a new staff there in order to protect the reputation of your restaurant

Thanks for your Possible spelling mistake found.
considérationYours
sincerely
,

William Possible spelling mistake found.AdamAdamsdamAdamadamADAC
adam