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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

Dear sir or madame, I am writing to you to express my dissatifaction on the services you promote on your restaurant. A friend of mine has recommend your famous restaurant at the fifth avenue as the best restaurant in the city, so i thought it was a nice idea to invite my familly to have a lunch there. Unfortunately the services was not as we expected. First, when we arrived, we choosed a table near the window in order to have a good view to the sea, we waited there for about 30 minutes and no one came to present at least the menu. Secondly when i tried to look for someone to serve us, i found a waiter, but he was busy Watching soccer on tv and he did not care about my request. I am afraid to informe you that the staff working in your property do not respect the costummers. It will be nice if you recruite a new staff there in order to protect the reputation of your restaurant Thanks for your considérationYours sincerely, William adam
Dear sir or madame,

I am writing to you to express my
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dissatifaction
on the services you promote on your restaurant.

A friend of mine has
Use past participle here: “recommended”.
recommend
your
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
restaurant at the
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
fifth avenue
as the best restaurant in the city,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
it was a nice
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
to invite my
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familly
to
When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: “have lunch”.
have a lunch
there.

Unfortunately the services was not as we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
.
First
, when we arrived, we
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean “chose”, the past tense form of the verb ‘choose’?
choosed
a table near the window in order to have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
view to the sea, we waited there for about 30 minutes and no one came to present at least the menu.
Secondly
when
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
tried to look for someone to serve us,
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
found a waiter,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
he was busy Watching soccer on
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
tv and
he did not care about my request.

I am afraid to
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informe
you that the staff working in your property do not respect the
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costummers
. It will be nice if you
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recruite
a new staff there in order to protect the reputation of your restaurant

Thanks for your
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considérationYours
sincerely
,

William
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adam

IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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