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You bought a washing machine and the machine doesn't work .Write your complain letter to the boss of shop

You bought a washing machine and the machine doesn't work. Write your complain letter to the boss of shop MmWVe

Dear SirI am writing this letter to complain about washing machine which I bought last week. I went to your shop and your assestant advised me to buy the washing machine which I purchased. He showed me how to use this machine. Although it was new, it didn't work properly. When I used first time, there was no problem and it washed clothes very well. However when I used second time, it didn't work and switched off. Moreover, it doesn't work in low electricity. In addition, it sounds a bit loud and dull. Finally, I am very dissapointed with your product. Because I can not wash in rush hour. It spends much time to wash. I hope that having my made my feelings clear to you, this matter ca be resolved. Yours sincerelyRasulova Gulzoda

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SirI
Did you mean "am I"?am I
am
 writing this letter to complain about washing machine which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 last week. I went to your shop and your Possible spelling mistake found.assistant
assestant
 advised me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 the washing machine which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
. He This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 me how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 this machine. Although it was new, it didn't work properly
. When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
first
 time, there was no problem and it washed clothes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 second time, it didn't work and switched off. Moreover
, it doesn't work in low electricity. In addition
, it sounds a bit loud and dull. Finally
, I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Possible spelling mistake found.disappointed
dissapointed
 with your product. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 I can not wash in rush hour. It spends much time to wash. I hope that having my made my feelings This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 to you, this matter ca be resolved
. Yours Possible spelling mistake found.
sincerelyRasulova
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