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Teaching English to children

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Dear Sam, I am a part time English teacher in state junior school. I have a Master’s degree in English literature from an Indian university. I am also IELTS certified for global teaching. A language is not just a hobby but a passion for me. I believe as soon as a child starting learning language is good for them. I have keen interest in teaching kids. I I have gone through your advertisement in the local news-paper for the English language tuition for your two children. Along with English language, I can help your children to guide in a proper direction for unique career options and help them to bring out their talent. I want to grow my career in teaching and this would be great opportunity for me. I believe in different approach with every student. Which helps them to learn quickly and with their comfort zone / fun. It will be a great opportunity for me get some experience by teaching them. Regards, Jack

Dear Sam,

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Regards,

Jack