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You moved to a new country and you want to write a letter to your former colleague. In your letter, you should: • tell him/her where did you go and what you are doing there (job) • describe your feeling • invite your friend to come.

You moved to a new country and you want to write a letter to your former colleague. In your letter, you should: • tell him/her where did you go and what you are doing there (job) • describe your feeling • invite your friend to come. YBE6Q

DEAR JOHN It has been a long time since we discussed it so I am writing this letter to explain my life. After I finished my education in 2018, I decided to apply for a new course in Canada and when I got my VISA in 2019, I have come here and started to study business marketing at ROYAL ROADS university which located in victoria, British Colombia. As you know, I was interested in studying in Canada and it was one of my dreams since I finished high school, so I am feeling happy to come here and proud of myself to aim for that goal. at the end of my letter, I would like to invite you here for a while time and you can stay in my place which I live in the big 2 bedrooms house and you will be satisfied to stay with me. in addition I would like to tell you some information about the Victoria. the weather ais very good and joyful through spring and summer and temperature would be between 15 to 30 in during the day and I suggest that if you decided to make a plan its better to get your ticket on that session. so it would be great to go outside and walking and camping and fishing here. I look forward to hearing from you best wishes Ali

DEAR JOHN

It has been a long time since we discussed it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I am writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 my life.

After I finished my education in 2018, I decided to apply for a new course in Canada and when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 my VISA in 2019, I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 here and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to study business marketing at ROYAL ROADS university which located in Possible spelling mistake found.VictoriaVictorianVitoriaVitória
victoria
, British Colombia.

As you know, I was interested
 in studying in Canada and it was one of my dreams since I finished high school, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I am feeling happy to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 here and proud of myself to aim for that goal.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAt
at
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of my letter, I would like to invite you here for a while time and you can stay in my place which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 2 bedrooms This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and you will be satisfied
 to stay with me. in addition
 I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 information about the Victoria.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 weather Possible spelling mistake found.AISAIsisashisair
ais
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and joyful through spring and summer and temperature would be Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 15 and 30".between 15 and 30
between 15 to 30
 in during the day and I suggest that if you decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a plan its better to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 your ticket on that session. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
 it would be great to go outside and walking and camping and fishing here.

I look forward to hearing from you

best wishes

Ali