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Complaint letter about learning centre

Complaint letter about learning centre nRb2g

Dear Sir or Madam, The cogent reason for writing you this letteris my dissatisfaction of your learning centre which I attended two weeks ago. First of all in your brochure you mentioned that the lessons would be three times a week. The first problem was that the lessons had been only once a week. At the beginning I did not realise it but then next lessons went on like this. Another problem was that I couldnot the lessons very well because the group's level was not suitable for me. As it was the beginning of my learning the language. Moreover, the teacher was late for the lessons every day. In addition the brochure claimed that the lessons lasted two hours a day, however they were only one hour and half. Last but not least the techers were not respectable for the learners. I think it is clear that your brochure was misleading. As a result I would like to hear your explanation for the problems. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply. With the utmost respect, Your faithfully.

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 that your brochure was misleading. As a result
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