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Complaint letter about learning centre

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Dear Sir or Madam, The cogent reason for writing you this letteris my dissatisfaction of your learning centre which I attended two weeks ago. First of all in your brochure you mentioned that the lessons would be three times a week. The first problem was that the lessons had been only once a week. At the beginning I did not realise it but then next lessons went on like this. Another problem was that I couldnot the lessons very well because the group's level was not suitable for me. As it was the beginning of my learning the language. Moreover, the teacher was late for the lessons every day. In addition the brochure claimed that the lessons lasted two hours a day, however they were only one hour and half. Last but not least the techers were not respectable for the learners. I think it is clear that your brochure was misleading. As a result I would like to hear your explanation for the problems. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply. With the utmost respect, Your faithfully.
Dear Sir or Madam, The cogent reason for writing you this
letteris
my dissatisfaction of your learning
centre
which I attended two weeks ago.
First of all
in your brochure you mentioned that the
lessons
would be three times a week. The
first
problem was that the
lessons
had been
only
once a week. At the beginning I did not
realise
it
but
then
next
lessons
went on like this. Another problem was that I
couldnot
the
lessons
very
well
because
the group's level was not suitable for me.
As
it was the beginning of my learning the language.
Moreover
, the teacher was late for the
lessons
every day. In
addition
the brochure claimed that the
lessons
lasted two hours a day,
however
they were
only
one hour and half. Last
but
not least the
techers
were not respectable for the learners. I
think
it is
clear
that your brochure was misleading.
As a result
I would like to hear your explanation for the problems. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply. With the utmost respect, Your
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter Complaint letter about learning centre

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
179 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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