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Tertiary Preparation Certificate

Tertiary Preparation Certificate YBE0V

Dear Sir/Madam, I would like some information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. If possible I would like to enroll in this course as a part-time student in 1992. I left school eight years ago after completing the 1ISC. Since then I have worked as a sales assistant in both Grace Bros and David Jones. From the beginning of this year, I have been in charge of the Children's Wear Department in Grace Bros, Lily field. However, in order to advance any further in my career into a managerial position, I will need to do some further study, such as a Marketing or Business Course. Because I have not studied for many years, I believe that I should complete the TPC before enrolling in a Business course. Could you please send me the information as soon as possible, and tell me the dates for enrolling in the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. Yours faithfully.

Dear Sir/Madam,

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 information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. If possible I would like to enroll in this course as a part-time student in 1992.

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 enrolling in a Business course.

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Yours faithfully
. 