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Dear Sir/MadanI am writing with regard to your advertisment for a course that I am interested in which named after 'Cefr c1'. I graduated from the Pedagogical Institution of Nukus in 2016 with degree ' English language and literature. I have been working as an English teacher since 2016 at school. I have a lot of achievments the language learning and teaching. Furthermore I hold certificate from the Cefr with B2+ level and my pupils achieved several international certificates such IELTS or Aptis. I must improve my English level. Therefore, It is interesting for me. I am not only patient, alert but also confidend, tolerant. I love teaching pupils. My students are always grateful from my lessons. If you want me attend an interwiev, I shall be glad to do so I am lookong forward to hearing from you. Your fathfully Barbara Winters
Dear Sir/
MadanI
am
writing with regard to your
advertisment
for a course that I
am interested
in which named after '
Cefr
c1'. I graduated from the Pedagogical Institution of
Nukus
in 2016 with degree
'
English language and literature. I have been working as an English teacher since 2016 at school.
I
have
a lot of
achievments
the language learning and teaching.
Furthermore
I hold certificate from the
Cefr
with B2+ level and my pupils achieved several international certificates such IELTS or
Aptis
. I
must
improve
my English level.
Therefore
, It is interesting for me. I am not
only
patient, alert
but
also
confidend
, tolerant. I
love
teaching pupils. My students are always grateful from my lessons. If you want me attend an
interwiev
, I shall be glad to do
so
I am
lookong
forward to hearing from you. Your
fathfully
Barbara
Winters
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IELTS letter you have recently advertisment for a course you are interested in

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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