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You were telling on our last meeting that you want to purchase a second hand television. My

You were telling on our last meeting that you want to purchase a second hand television. My 25Qmw

Dear Ram, I’m doing fine, though my life is quite hectic at the moment because, as you know, I am moving abroad and there is so much to do! There are a few things that I can’t take with me because they are too big so I am seeing if any of my friends would be interested in buying them. One of the things I do not want to take with me is my television, and I thought you might like to buy it off me for a cheap price. It’s a 32“ flat screen TV, and it’s a Phillips model. It has a USB port so you can just plug in a thumb drive to watch movies or listen to music. It has great stereo surround sound As you know, I’m leaving the country at the end of the month, which is only two weeks away. So if you want to see it, it would be best to come on 20th or 21st. That will give me time to sell it elsewhere if you are not interested. Warm wishes, Sham.

Dear Ram,

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because
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so
 much to do!

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because
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big
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thought
 you might like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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cheap
 price.

It’s a 32“ flat screen TV, and it’s a Phillips model. It has a USB port This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you can This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 plug in a thumb drive to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 movies or listen to music. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
It
 has great stereo surround sound

As you know, I’m leaving the country at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the month, which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 two weeks away. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 if you want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 it, it would be best to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 on 20th or 21st. That will give me time to sell it elsewhere if you are not interested.

Warm wishes,

Sham. 