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You bought a new stereo system, but it went wrong almost immediately. Write a letter of complaint to the shop.

You bought a new stereo system, but it went wrong almost immediately. Write a letter of complaint to the shop. yDr1E

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the stereo system, which I purchased from your department store. I have been a very loyal customer of your company for many years and this is certainly not the quality that I have come to expect from you. However, on 17. 07 I purchased on of your products through the online shop of your company and I discovered, to my horror, that the switch button of the stereo system did not work properly so I had difficulty to switch it. Furthermore/Another problem/Besides that the quality of speakers was not good as expected. As It produces defective sounds. The most visible problem is that when I opened the box it did not have plug in wire, since its place in the box was empty. I was expecting a higher level of service from your company and I am really disappointed with how things turned out. This why I am returning the stereo system for a full refund with out any replacement of this product. I look forward to hearing from you with the resolution to this problem Yours faithfully. John Smith

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the stereo system, which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 from your department store.

I have been a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 loyal customer of your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 years and this is certainly
 not the quality that I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 from you. However
, on 17. 07 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 on of your products through the online shop of your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and I discovered, to my horror, that the switch button of the stereo system did not work properly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I had difficulty to switch it. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Furthermore,
Furthermore
/Another problem/Besides
 that the quality of speakers was not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
. As It produces defective sounds. The most visible problem is that when I opened the box it did not have plug in wire, since its place in the box was empty.

I was expecting a higher level of service from your Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).company, and
company and
 I am really
 disappointed with how things turned out. This why I am returning the stereo system for a full refund This word is usually written together. Did you mean "without"?without
with out
 any replacement of this product.

I look forward to hearing from you with the resolution to this problem

Yours faithfully
.

John Smith