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fast fashion effects on socity

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These day environment faced with lots of problems originated from our behavior, one of these problems is fast fashion which shows our self- indulgence than nature and our future generation. Environmental problems, wasting resources, air pollution are not the only problems that stem from fast fashion I think creating a new attitude, especially in youth and teenagers, in which we think that our acceptance in the community has its direct connection with what we wear is the most dangerous effect of fast fashion. Nowadays, most of the people wants to wear like celebrities and act like them whilst celebrities appear in the social media with different colorful and luxurious clothes each time, most of the families couldn't buy new clothes due to the economic problems in society so they became frustrated and depressed and sometimes in acute conditions leads to suicide. In addition the other disadvantage of this new attitude is consumerism. There are lots of people who are eager to buy new clothes why there is no space in their closet and interesting thing for some of them is they get a loan to buy clothes. And this desire is the root of lots of troubles. For example, my aunt is one of those people and she had a lot of argument in his family because of spending much money on her clothes and finally she divorced from my uncle. However, fast-fashion sympathizers have their own reason to agree with this action, in my opinion fast fashion disadvantages overcomes to its advantages in all aspects. People who care about their environment and their family should pay more attention to fast fashion.
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that our acceptance in the community has its direct connection with what we wear is the most
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Nowadays, most of the
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colorful and luxurious
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each time, most of the families couldn't
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in society
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IELTS letter fast fashion effects on socity

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