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The letter was on booking a hotel room, number of people, general plan while staying there and any special requirements.

The letter was on booking a hotel room, number of people, general plan while staying there and any special requirements. VYdVA
Dear sir, My name is John, I am planning a holiday in Udaipur with my family. I am writing this letter for booking a room in your 5 star hotel. My friend recommended to me your hotel as he visited last year there with his family. We would be four in number, my wife, my two children. I am planning this trip after a long time. That's why I want to make it a memorable holiday. I would like to stay there for 5 days and 4 nights. My friend told me that there is a sports room where we can play lots of games. I want to know the tourist places near your hotel so that I can make a plan accordingly. I need a room with a balcony and swimming pool. Moreover, my elder son has an allergy to smoking, so I would like to stay in a non-smoking unit. If you can arrange all these facilities for me, please let me know. I will respond with a deposit. Hearing for a prompt reply from you! Yours faithfully,
Dear sir,

My name is John, I am planning a holiday in Udaipur with my family. I am writing this letter for booking a room in your
5 star
hotel.

My friend recommended to me your hotel as he visited last year there with his family. We would be
four in number
, my wife, my two children. I am planning this trip after a long time. That's why I want to
make
it a memorable holiday.

I would like to stay there for 5 days and 4 nights. My friend
told
me that
there is a sports
room where we can play lots of games. I want to know the tourist places near your hotel
so
that I can
make
a plan
accordingly
.

I need a room with a balcony and swimming pool.
Moreover
, my elder son has an allergy to smoking,
so
I would like to stay in a non-smoking unit. If you can arrange all these facilities for me,
please
let
me know. I will respond with a deposit.

Hearing for a prompt reply from you!

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter The letter was on booking a hotel room, number of people, general plan while staying there and any special requirements.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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