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You bought a jar of planut . You are not pleased with it , about the quality of the product and behaveour of the staff .Write letter of complaint .In your letter .

You bought a jar of planut. You are not pleased with it, about the quality of the product and behaveour of the staff. Write letter of complaint. In your letter. YdWmm
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing in the hope that you can help me with a problem regarding a planut that I recently bought. On 26 April I purchased a planut from your food shop for the past 3 years, I have been purchasing and using your food. I have been satisfied with the result. I have been a very loyal customer of your food shop for many years and this is certainly not the quality that I have come to expect from you but I purchased become obsolete a planut. I had eaten become obsolete a planut after I feel illand my condition become worse. My dad called ambulance. I was medical examination by doctor I discovered, to my horror. I do not believe that I am asking for much in return for my time and efford as all I want is my money back or to have replacement. I look forward to receiving your reply. Yuors faithfully Tina
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing in the hope that you can
help
me with a problem regarding a
planut
that I recently
bought
. On 26 April I
purchased
a
planut
from your food shop for the past 3 years, I have been purchasing and using your food. I have
been satisfied
with the result. I have been a
very
loyal customer of your food shop for
many
years and this is
certainly
not the quality that I have
come
to
expect
from you
but
I
purchased
become obsolete a
planut
.
I
had eaten become obsolete a
planut
after I feel
illand
my condition become worse. My dad called ambulance. I was medical examination by doctor I discovered, to my horror. I do not believe that I am asking for much in return for my time and
efford
as all I want is my money back or to have replacement.
I
look forward to receiving your reply.
Yuors
faithfully
Tina
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IELTS letter You bought a jar of planut. You are not pleased with it, about the quality of the product and behaveour of the staff. Write letter of complaint. In your letter.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
160 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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