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Letter to the manager for restriction of the community hall

Letter to the manager for restriction of the community hall 8L8yr

Dear David, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing in regards to the restriction of usage of the Brookshire Community Hall for our music Group. We are a group of 20 musicians who have been using the hall since 2 years and have been practicing music on Tuesday and Friday evenings. Suddenly, we have been told that we cannot no longer use the hall without giving a proper reason. Music is a therapy to many people and we are doing this for a noble cause. We are registered with a cancern aid organisation and have been playing for cancer patients since 2 years now. It give relief to our heart and also some smile on the people near us. We also collect charity for them through this and are doing it purposely. We are teenagers and are usually free after our tutions almost daily evening. Our group is good for the community in many ways. Fristly, we are doing it for a noble cause. Secondly, we teach many poor people for free. Also, we go on the old age homes on weekends to make elderly people happy. I would really request you to look into this matter and help us with some alternative timings if possible( We are free almost everday in evenings), We are practing here since long and would like to carry with the same. Thanks and looking forward to a quick resolution. Regards, Sagar

Dear David,

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