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Dear Rosy, I am really excited to hear that you would be coming here in India to experience my beautiful country. I have been waiting for a long time to meet you too but I am really sorry to share that unfortunately, I have a busy schedule during that time. I apologise you for my unavailability and I am sure you must have planned everything for your visit by now and its making me feel bad for not able to meet you and spend indelible time with you. Since I am preoccupied with my official trip during those dates, It would be difficult for me to spare time for you and exhibit to you this amazing country. This is a very important project that I am working on and will help me for my career ahead and hence its difficult to cancel it. I hope as a good friend you will understand my situation. If possible, I would like to suggest you come during October 10th-30th. Its best time to visit India as its not very hot during those period and we also we big festivals at that time like Dusshera, where you can enjoy stories of truth winning over evil. You will love the dandia dance night also, where you will get a chance to get dressed up in ethnic wear and playing with small sticks followed by festival of lights called Diwali. Knowing you, it will mesmerise you and you will fall in love with my country. Again apologising you for asking you to change your dates if possible and enjoy the true culture of my country Love, Rahul
Dear Rosy,

I am
really
excited to hear that you would be coming here in India to experience my
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beautiful
country. I have been waiting for a long
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time
to
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meet
you too
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but
I am
really
sorry to share that unfortunately, I have a busy schedule during that time.

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I
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apologise
you for my
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unavailability and
I am sure you
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must
have planned everything for your visit by
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now
and its making me feel
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bad
for not able to
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meet
you and spend indelible
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time
with you.

Since I
am preoccupied
with my official trip during those dates, It would be difficult for me to spare
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time
for you and exhibit to you this amazing country. This is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
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important
project that I am working on and will
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help
me for my career ahead and
hence
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its
difficult to cancel it. I hope as a
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good
friend you will understand my situation.

If possible, I would like to suggest you
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come
during October 10th-30th. Its best
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time
to visit India as its not
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very
hot during those
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period and
we
also
we
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big
festivals at that
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time
like
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Dusshera
, where you can enjoy stories of truth winning over evil. You will
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love
the
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dandia
dance night
also
, where you will
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get
a chance to
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get
dressed up in ethnic wear and playing with
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small
sticks followed by festival of lights called Diwali. Knowing you, it will
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mesmerise
you and you will fall in
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love
with my country.

Again
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apologising
you for asking you to
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change
your dates if possible and enjoy the true culture of my country

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Love
,

Rahul
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IELTS letter write a letter to a friend

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
270 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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