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Dear Sabrina, Thank you for writing me and asking me about my favorite day of the week.

Dear Sabrina, Thank you for writing me and asking me about my favorite day of the week. kxgrM
Dear Sabrina, Thank you for writing me and asking me about my favorite day of the week. Well, It's a pretty hard question. Personally, I think it would be Saturday. Firstly, The reason is also the most important for me is that I will not have to study on Saturday and also the next day, which is Sunday. So, I can stay up late and sleep longer at night. And in the morning, I don't have to go to school or think about my homework, which makes me sleepy. Instead of that, I will take time to relax and ease my mind by reading books or watching movies with my parents. It's my usual morning without studying. I also do a lot of fun activities in the afternoon and evening, such as playing video games, hanging out with my friends and playing chess, which is my favorite activity. And on Saturday night, I will stay up late and watch some of my favorite TV shows until 12: 00. It's kind of interesting for me to have a great time at weekends. That is my answer for your question. I hope you like it. I really look forward to your letter. Love, David
Dear Sabrina, Thank you for writing me and asking me about my favorite day of the week. Well, It's a pretty
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Personally
, I
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think
it would be Saturday.

Firstly
, The reason is
also
the most
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important
for me is that I will not
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have to
study on Saturday and
also
the
next
day, which is Sunday.
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So
, I can stay up late and sleep longer at night. And in the morning, I don't
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have to
go to school or
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think
about my homework, which
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makes
me sleepy.
Instead
of that, I will take time to relax and
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ease
my mind by reading books or watching movies with my parents. It's my usual morning without studying.

I
also
do
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a lot of
fun activities in the afternoon and evening, such as playing video games, hanging out with my friends and playing chess, which is my favorite activity. And on Saturday night, I will stay up late and
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watch
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some
of my favorite TV
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shows
until 12: 00. It's kind of interesting for me to have a great time at weekends.

That is
my answer for your question. I hope you like it. I
really
look forward to your letter.

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Love
,

David
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IELTS letter Dear Sabrina, Thank you for writing me and asking me about my favorite day of the week.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
201 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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